一应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。第二档(4~6):未恰当完成试题规定的任务,信息未能清楚地传达给读者。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。语法结构单调,词汇项目有限。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性第一档(1~3):未完成试题规定的任务,信息未能传达给读者。明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。语法结构单调,词汇项目有限。较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。不得分(0):未能传达给读者任何信息。内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。第二节:参考范文:After waiting at the food bank for 20 minutes,Kevin found Anita unlocking the door.Kevin made thebold decision of giving the money to the Sumner Community Food Bank,putting his own fear of continuous pov-erty aside.Kevin approached Anita and handed the bag to her.When Anita weighed the bag,she realized it wassurprisingly light,since she was thinking the bag contained a food donation.After being told the truth,Anitaalso didn't know how to deal with the money so she called the police and asked them to investigate the bag.However,after investigation,the police still had no explanation for the money.Eventually,theyreturned the 17,000 to the Sumner Community Food Bank.They also awarded Kevin with a Citizen Certificatefor him being honest.However,they weren't the only ones who recognized this rare quality in Kevin.The Sum-ner Community Food Bank itself awarded Kevin many gift cards.Anita respected Kevin for his honesty andoffered him a job.Kevin cherished this job opportunity and he would no longer be a homeless man.一、评分原则1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分2.评分时,先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。3.词数少于130的,从总分中减去2分。4.评分时,应主要从以下四个方面考虑:(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;(2)内容的丰富性;(3)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;(4)上下文的连贯性。5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。6.如书写较差以致影响交际,可将分数降低一个档次。二、各档次的给分范围和要求第五档(21~25)一与所给短文融洽度高,与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。内容丰富。【高三英语·参考答案第4页(共5页)】·23-166C·